Wednesday, October 24, 2012

Brooke's Creative Writing legend assignment

Once upon a time there lived a girl, she was ordinary, she wasn’t a princess or a queen. She was a mystery, quiet, and lonely although people who cared constantly surrounded her. She was broken and lost and as do most girls, she fell in love. It was a love that touched the hearts of others and inspired greatness. She found her prince but sadly she was not his princess. It all started when her life was coming close to its end, on the beach at the end of the dock looking at the stars. The night ended with soaking wet with an innocent kiss in a locked bathroom. Feelings were never meant to get involved and they knew that. Their family and friends were like the Montague’s and the Capulet’s, she may as well have been Juliette and he was Romeo. Juliette fell in love with him quickly, to quick. She knew she had found love on a Friday night that faded into Saturday morning. They stood there silently watching the traffic lights change at three AM, the world was empty. It was just them and she thought to herself he is all I ever need. How perfect of a moment it was to rain, started ever so gently then it started to pour. The rain felt like little drops of heaven, she watched his blurred face walk to her and he said the words “kissed in the rain, check.”. We all know what comes next, he kissed her and it changed everything. They both decided to fall that night, they talked all day and all night. He made her carefree and she made him better. They learned how to grow with each other, she learned things about herself she needed to. They kept it a secret as best they could, but as you should know everyone has their opinions. She started to question things and they began to fight. It broke her heart every time he would say, you know it all has to come to an end some day. She knew that she had learned it over and over in her life, this girl was broken and as I said before her life was close to its end. There was water running and a blade, she said goodbye. Romeo couldn’t breath when he got the news. Two hours passed by that he thought she was dead. She was given four days to sit and think. She went away to live at friends. The night she got there she called him and there was no answer. He was furious with her because she said goodbye, he knew that she thought of him and she chose to leave him behind. That was the night they both said “I love you” it was sweet and innocent. She promised to never hurt him again; she said she would be okay. Juliette was sick though; she was surrounded and clouded by a familiar darkness. She was able to hide it for a while, they were doing well she was happy. She was doing so well, she found out what hope is. It was a few weeks before the darkness came back and it was done. He said, “you didn’t just disappoint me, you disappointed yourself.”. She was left behind and abandoned, but she picked herself up, she’s moving on. You see she knows she’s still not a princess or a queen, but he showed her she is far from ordinary. She knows she’s special; she’s special because she learned how to love. Hopeless and broken when she met him, dark and doubtful too. I sadly cannot say she still isn’t all of these things, but thankfully I can say she is doing much better now. He helped her and touched her heart like no other and she still misses him every moment of everyday. She is happy though, that he is where he wants to be and he escaped his darkness. Now they are just another beautiful yet tragic love that was lost. He’s with his princess, and one day she will get another prince. She never saw him coming and she will never be the same. They now live as strangers far apart, its sad but that’s how love works sometimes. Love is hard and it often ends with heartbreak, but it is always worth it. She learned to never give up a chance at love and not to be afraid of the end.  

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